WIP - Mask of my soul

the inspiration for this drawing i got from an old drawing of mine!! it was done, like, two years ago!!

i really like the idea, but i dont think i did it in the right sequence, i mean, first i did the colored, and then i did the gray, but in some parts the gray hid the colored... and now im upset...

Please, tell me what you think of it... critiques are very welcome!!
oh, do you think the title fits or it just sucks?!

let me know!! thanks for viewing!!